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Open continuity notes

Places where the Book 2 drafts or outline don't yet match Book 1, plus decisions still open. None of these are resolved; the drafts are shown as written.

Clashes with Book 1

  1. 1. Where Book 2 opens

    Ch1

    Book 2: Ch1 reopens in Millbrook, the morning after the battle, with Depthspire's doors at the edge of town.

    Book 1 canon: Book 1 ends days later, on the road north past the Boundary Bridge — "Book Two begins at the gate."

  2. 2. Aslin vs Aldric

    Ch1–4, outline

    Book 2: Aslin, a battlefield surgeon who joins after the Millbrook battle.

    Book 1 canon: Book 1's Millbrook surgeon is Aldric, who walks on with the party. Aslin looks like Aldric renamed; Aldric is never mentioned in Book 2.

  3. 3. Puddle and Jasper written as strangers

    Ch1

    Book 2: Both arrive as new faces; Puddle says he doesn't know any of the party.

    Book 1 canon: They met the party in Book 1 Ch8 (the Copper Ladle), where Jasper set a rendezvous.

  4. 4. Serana in the dungeon

    Outline Ch4–5, supplementary outline Ch12

    Book 2: The outline gives Serana roles in Ch4–5 (anchoring zones, reversing petrification) and refers to "her god".

    Book 1 canon: Serana is not in the Book 2 party — she left for the east in Book 1 Ch10 — and her deity is a goddess.

  5. 5. Thornik's direction

    Supplementary outline Ch12

    Book 2: Thornik is sent east.

    Book 1 canon: In Book 1 Thornik went north (the northern road home to Deepstone Hold).

  6. 6. Caelin's scale becomes an "ember shard"

    Ch3–4

    Book 2: In Ch3–4 it is an ember shard hanging against his sternum/chest.

    Book 1 canon: The dragon's scale is bound into Caelin's right forearm (Ch1–2 of Book 2 still match this).

  7. 7. Vex's injury drifts

    Ch3–4

    Book 2: Vex favours an injured leg ("her good leg", Ch3; "her injured leg from Book 1's final act", Ch4).

    Book 1 canon: Her Book 1 injury is her ribs.

  8. 8. Depthspire's age

    Ch1, Ch3, Ch4, outline

    Book 2: Three hundred years (Ch1), a three-thousand-year-old dungeon (Ch3), prisoners of 412 and ~400 years (Ch4), three centuries (outline).

    Book 1 canon: Book 1's epilogue says the prison had worked for eighty years.

  9. 9. Durgan called an assassin

    Outline

    Book 2: The outline calls Durgan an assassin.

    Book 1 canon: Canon says soldier ("soldier of a fallen empire").

  10. 10. Chapter 4 title

    Ch4

    Book 2: The Ch4 draft is titled "The Void Husks".

    Book 1 canon: The outline titles Ch4 "The Forgotten Ones" ("The Void Husks" is its Act II).

Open decisions

  • Aslin's fate

    Survives intact / seriously wounded but lives / dies saving Durgan / becomes a semi-permanent series medic.

  • Aethelcrag's end

    Destroyed / freed from the Seal's corruption and dies at peace / recurring spectral intelligence / transfers his essence into Durgan. The current outline uses "freed and dies at peace".

  • Order of the three paths

    The outline runs Shadow → Stone → the vault approach, but notes this is flexible.

  • Thane's coalition

    Do they survive the collapse and reach the surface? Scholar and Brick could become recurring characters.

  • Jasper's profile and the Jasper/Puddle material

    Jasper's profile still to settle, along with the Ch8 / Act III material for Jasper and Puddle.

  • Background-character interludes

    Where the four interludes go. Proposed: Elowen after Ch3, Thornik after Ch5, Serana after Ch8, Nyxara after Ch10. None are written.